
The great-beginning-but-mediocre-book-syndrome is something that I have experienced a lot lately - not only in
The Shadow of the Wind. I have no doubt that it is hard to write a good book - so don't get me wrong, I admire the ability to write great beginnings its just that it so disappointing every time it happens...
Paul Auster's
The Brooklyn Follies started out great - just read the first few sentences:
"I was looking for a quiet place to die. Someone recommended Brooklyn, and so the next morning I traveled down there from Westchester to scope out the terrain. I hadn't been back in fifty-six years and I remembered nothing."
First of all I think that it is nice to start with an end - in this case the most certain one - death. With this Auster kind of set the rules for the game as well as indicate that the story will be about change. Beckett does something very similar in his play
Endgame which starts with Clov's great line "Finished, it is finished, nearly finished, it must be nearly finsihed." A story cannot start with death - as death is static. The narrator/Clov think that the end has come but as the story/play proceeds they realizes that that nothing is nearly as finished as they thought at the beginning.
Then there is the absolute absurd notion that someone would recommend a place to die on! In which kind of casual conversation would this topic come up? Oh, by the way, which place would you recommend one to die at? And even if we do say that the topic would come up - what kind of person would recommend Brooklyn? I would may be have recommended some beautiful place in the nature, a nice hospice, I don't know, but I can't imagine why anyone would recommend Brooklyn as a good place to die at.
And then comes the third sentence that really set off the story. What a great beginning!
Auster really knows how to handle his language. His protagonist is a grumpy, divorced, cancer recovering older man with a very bitter and cynical attitude towards everything - just read how he describes his daughter on the second page of the book:
"Rachel is not a stupid person. She has a doctorate in bio-chemistry ... but much like her mother before her, it's a rare day when she speaks in anything but platitudes - all those exhausted phrases and hand-me-down ideas that cram the dump sites of contemporary wisdom."
The last dense sentence is concise bitterness at its best.
Yet in the end,
The Brooklyn Follies although it was a nice enough book, didn't manage to keep up the great level it had started out from. A little to predictable, too much closure, too much happiness archived for my taste - almost a little cheesy...
I think that the 2 books of Orhan Pamuk that I have read also suffers from the same syndrome. Both
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Snow starts out great, but about half way into the books they start to be very repetitive and loose the charm.